Fates Unfortunate: Page 1 (A Mini Comic)

Again sorry for the long wait and the rough art but it's finally here. Months of planning and sketching but it's finally here. Sorry but this comic is a mini comic. As a college student I won't have the time and commitment to have a page ready every week. Don't worry though the story is still there just shortened or condensed, whichever makes sense to you.I'll put a brief description of each panel here if you seem to be lost while reading. Sorry for the purple pages but it was something I had in hand at the time and It fits perfect as my intro pages.

Panel's- (Little dialogs will help understand the comic more as well)
1. Well It's my own alternate reality so let's just say after Discord the main 6 have their own little headquarters ( *cough cough* of Friendship *Cough*)
2. Well here they're saving some random white and orange pony trapped in the mountains
3. So in this world the genderbend versions of the main 6 exists but are either a cousin or a brother. Here Rainbow Blitz is Rainbow Dash's brother that twilight develops and falls for at first sight.
4. Did I mention he's part of the wonderbolt's academy? and he invites twilight as his plus one but you know she thinks of something else. XD